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Three Haiku Poems - Wildfires
so much energy
flames approach with a strong force
resisting nothing
fire burning brightly
quick flash as the flames leapt high
speeding fast as sound
trees add oxygen
making the flames leap higher
without fuel it’s out
Haiku – is a unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all.
It is created by a vision, it paints a mental image in the reader’s mind.
Senryu - consists of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all.is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku
Wildfires make me sad. I hate the loss of habitat and worry the wild things suffer in the fire. You have captured the energy of the flames well here.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured beautiful images from an otherwise sad event- wildfires!
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku is brilliant ☺