Wednesday, January 8, 2020

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Wednesday (8) New Years Morning



Tan Renga
It is a short chained poem written by two poets. It looks very similar with Tanka, but Tanka is written by one poet.
You have to write the second stanza through associating on scenes in the haiku (the starting verse).

This Tan Renga with the given haiku is taken from Jane Reichhold online “Dictionary of Haika” from the season New Year.
New Year's morning
the first day begins
in the same dream  (Jane Reichhold}
bells were ringing this morning
echoing around the world   

2020 Elsie Hagley


Tan Renga Wednesday

4 comments:

  1. Notes asking for peace. Beautiful finish.

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  2. We need those bells of peace, Elsie. Nicely done!

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  4. Latin: seize [the] day -
    that was the saying of my girl
    who passed-away when I was 15,
    she 17. Love you, Janet.
    Love you, too, for giving
    moi, aussi an interim.
    GBY

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